Dr Faustus has submitted this for the grammatical hideousness in the ‘If’ clause (actually not one, since it lacks a verb; it has now been corrected). However, since the item comes from ‘a magazine for the global citizen’, not a dedicated marketing publication, the jargonistic phrase ‘Customer Reactions’ seems inappropriate, as well as ungrammatical: the relation between the nouns should be shown by a possessive form. The opening paragraph revisits the ‘Nestlé problem’ mentioned earlier this week:
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| Link: Good, ‘Naked People Took Over a Coffee Shop […]’ |
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