Showing posts with label national government. Show all posts
Showing posts with label national government. Show all posts

Wednesday, 24 June 2015

Multimangle, # 19

Des Pond of Slough has contributed part of a recent report on Michael Gove’s latest pronouncements, which the new Justice Secretary and the Telegraph reporter have rather mangled between them:

Link: The Telegraph, ‘Stephen Fry corrected my “linguistic errors”, says Michael Gove’

In the first paragraph here, the phrases being discussed — ‘best-placed’ and ‘high quality’ — should be flagged, probably by quotation marks since newspapers tend to eschew italicization, as in fact occurs earlier in the report:


As for the instruction itself, Cambridge Dictionaries Online points out that hyphenation is becoming less common, probably (my hypothesis) because fewer people are being taught how to use hyphens properly or how to check a dictionary to determine their correct usage, and possibly also as an influence from scientific writing. However, anyone who has been faced with a stream of apparently random words, and left by the writer to work out their relations and connections, might well argue, on the basis that punctuation is intended to aid clarity, that hyphens should be used consistently and more often than not. It should not be up to the reader to guess what the writer meant, and while common usage might be a case for some changes in language, changes that compromise clarity of expression are not progressive and/or beneficial, but unhelpful to effective communication.

Paragraph two above substitutes ‘arc’ for ‘ark’. Given the relative position on the keyboard of c and k, it is hard to excuse this as a typographical slip, so it must be a homophonous error, however unlikely. Even if whoever first transcribed Gove’s words failed to recognize the term as a biblical reference, you’d have thought the journalist might have encountered Raiders of the Lost Ark, which, although an ‘oldie’, was the topic of a feature article in The Telegraph as recently as March 2015.

Finally, if Gove really said ‘unfitted’, I think he needs to call his grammar-guru Stephen Fry (see the article’s title) for more help. What he wants here is unfit, which Oxford Dictionaries defines as ‘not of the necessary quality or standard to meet a particular purpose’ and which is used of things; and not unfitted which, unless related to clothing or furniture, refers only to persons being ‘not fitted or suited for a particular task or vocation’.
unfitted for unfit; hyphenation; arc for ark

Wednesday, 26 November 2014

Friday, 31 January 2014

Not Washed or Cooked, # 109

Today’s example comes courtesy of Craig Robert Bruce. I’ve included a large area to show that it’s rather messed up throughout, but the job title is the main mangle:

Link: Directgov | Universal Jobmatch | Jobs ‘Mad About Books: Computer Opporater’
Computer Opporater

Saturday, 14 September 2013

Not Washed or Cooked, # 56

These beauties are extracted from a form letter (submitted to the blog anonymously) sent or given to ‘jobseekers’ signed up to a ‘Refresh’ course offered by A4e, a private company. Since the letter refers to sending feedback back to an individual’s ‘Jobcentre Adviser’, the course may well be in receipt of government funding. Its header states that it offers the long-term unemployed ‘advice’, ‘skills’ and ‘support’, and the course includes formal training in ‘CV and letter writing’… 

These extracts, however, suggest that A4e needs help with its own letter-writing skills, notably in grammar, proofreading, and constructing coherent clauses:



Do you have any closed relatives?

Wednesday, 17 July 2013

Spellchecking Is Never Enough, # 72

What an odd address:


The email shows elsewhere that it’s actually Castle Mews. Perhaps the writer should have copied the correct version instead of retyping — well, mistyping — it.

Sunday, 16 June 2013

The Wrong Word Entirely, # 11

It would appear that The Telegraph’s Senior Political Correspondent, Christopher Hope, likes this mangled word, since he went out of his way to quote it in an article:

Link: The Telegraph, ‘Government’s £1bn rural broadband plan “a train crash waiting to happen”’

It's not entirely clear who coined it;* presumably it arrived on a press release.


* Actually, coined is not entirely accurate: there are other instances, including an article by N. Jolly in the North West Evening Mail from 17 September 2005. Here, its found in the title and, given the subject matter, its jolly hard (bad pun, but had to be done) to decide whether its deliberate or an error. This is the title: ‘Apopleptic over Apostrophes’. However, since the focus is incorrect apostrophes, apopleptic is probably not being used to make a point at all…

Saturday, 18 May 2013

How many in a couple?

The Government's official website seems to have an uncommon perception of how many people can be involved in a marriage:


The writer might usefully consult Oxford Dictionaries (which, as previously noted, is not always 100% accurate, but is sound on this topic) to discover the correct construction and usage of comparative and superlative adjectives.

Wednesday, 23 January 2013

Now Try It In English, # 1

This is rather eye-watering:

 
The speaker is Anna Soubry, Parliamentary Under Secretary of State at the Department of Health, who has previously worked in journalism and law.

Tuesday, 11 December 2012

Spellchecking Is Never Enough, # 2

Apparently CIFAS are using Ali G to do their proofreading…


CIFAS - If you organisation

(Note: if you have your website designed by someone else, it's a bonus if the designer checks the textual content you provide, not a basic part of the package. You're paying for the website to be designed and created, but you supply the text and it's your website, so it's up to you to check that it is correct.)