You Cannot Be Serious, # 41

A new contributor, with the nom-de-mangle fellow grammar enthusiast & coffee snob, has sent this horrible headline and subhead, which only a small change in word order and/or better punctuation might have improved — and when did headings become so lengthy and detailed?

Link: The Guardian

For mentally ill too often prison means solitary, neglect, and even death || […] series of failures by authorities that are only too common