Thursday 16 May 2013

Singular or Plural? # 4


The writer has lost sight of the subject noun in this sentence's sub-clause, resulting in disagreement with the verb:


Perhaps 'the imposition' should have been omitted entirely, since it's superfluous.

1 comment:

  1. If you write thirty words in the passive voice without so much as a comma, you've got to think about re-phrasing. That is one ugly sentence.

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