Thursday 3 April 2014

Not Washed or Cooked, # 123

Following on from yesterday’s introduction to DBA theatre [sic] by Just Liam, today’s mangles come from a page on the company’s ‘School Enrichment Programme’, where the ‘Secondary Enrichment Programme’ offers


These include:
Link: DBA theatre | School Enrichment Programme | School Enrichment Programme

Quite apart from the patchy punctuation and inconsistent presentation of possessives, a theatre company that cannot spell Artaud and Stanislavsky (or Stanislavski) does not inspire confidence.

Another page — The ‘SEN Enrichment Programme’ — cuts off the final sentence (‘We also offer workshops for days suc’) with a badly-positioned slide show.

It doesn’t take long to spellcheck, proofread and polish, but no-one’s done any of it here.
Artoud, Boals; Stanisklavsky; punctuation; apostrophe

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